1st Literary Agent Rejection Letter-Is it A Form letter? You tell me what U think!

This has to do with my first book, a book about ‘Prozac Poopout’ and Tardive Dyskinesia, a movement disorder caused by antipsychotics, usually from long-term use. National Alliance of Mental Illness, (NAMI) says if you take Abilify or Seroquel, Latuda, Geodon, Risperdal, Melleril, Thorazine, Haldol, Zyprexa (or whatever), for over a decade, you stand a 30-50% chance of getting TD…but try bringing up that issue at one of their “Connection” support group meetings……So Anyway……


I recently did a public speaking event on my topic (Tardive Dyskinesia awareness, prevention, treatment and my experience with it) at the American Psychiatric Association (APA)’s annual shindig in New York City. My book isn’t finished, but since many agents and publishers are based in New York, I figured I’d send my colorful flyer with color picture and a sample of my work, 3 short chapters. I reached out to 12 agents and five publishers. I got one agent auto-reply from a lady at a mid-level agency, heard nothing from the publishers and got this one today, from a literary rep at Folio, one of the top ten agencies, (from what I can see)

(BTW, Both of these literary reps expressed an interest in medicine/health/current affairs and psychology.  My work falls squarely into all three, plus women’s health and women’s issues). Anyway, here’s my very first letter of rejection ……………..

Dear Allison,
I want to thank you personally for giving me the opportunity to read your work. I understand the querying process can be difficult at times, and want you to know how seriously we consider each project we receive at Folio. I am sorry to say, though, that unfortunately I do not have a place on my current list to take this on.
Please keep in mind that every agent has different tastes and sensibilities and more or less bandwidth to take on new projects at any given time.  And this is a crazily subjective business. What does not work for one agent may work perfectly for another, and I encourage you to continue your search for someone to champion your work, and trust you will find the agent (or publisher) your work absolutely clicks with.
Please know I wish you all the best,



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